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Grammar 101: Adverbs and Adverbials

3/10/2023

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What's discussed in this post

  • ​Introduction: powerful adverbials
  • What is an adverbial?
  • The 5 types of adverbials
  • Adverbial degrees
  • Placement of adverbials
  • Signs of ineffective adverbials
  • Exercise 4
  • Further Study

Introduction: powerful adverbials

“Easily improve your writing by doing this one thing: delete adverbs.”

This is one of the most common pieces of writing advice I see on social media, and I hate it. It’s horrible advice because it’s vague, broad, and a bit moralistic (it sets up those who use adverbs as “bad writers” and those who don’t as “good writers”).
You’re not a bad writer if you use adverbs.

In fact, even those writers who take that advice to page probably still use them. Adverbials are indeed one of the most powerful tools in a writer’s style kit because they’re so versatile. Not only are there 5 types of adverbials, but each type is movable. This means a writer can play with the position of adverbials until they find the right emphasis, rhythm, and tone for the message they want to convey.

What is an adverbial?

Before we learn how to harness the power of adverbials, we need to be able to recognize them. In general, an adverbial is a word, phrase, or clause that modifies anything but nouns. That means adverbs can modify a verb, adjective, adverb, independent clause, preposition, and conjunction. They answer the questions of when (time), where (place), how (manner), why 
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(reason), and how often (frequency). Although they are considered a part of the predicate, they can appear nearly anywhere in the sentence.

The 5 types of adverbials

The five main types of adverbs are:
  1. Simple & flat adverbs are single-word modifiers. While simple adverbs exist in the same form as nouns, verbs, or adjectives, flat adverbs are formed by adding -ly to an adjective or participle.
  2. Prepositional phrases are a group of words that begin with a preposition and form a single modifier. They provide direction, place, time, duration, manner, and cause.
  3. 1.Noun phrases are a group of words that resemble a noun. These are tricky to identify because they can look like the object of a preposition (with the preposition missing) or a direct object for intransitive verbs—which take no direct object. A trick to determine that you’re looking at an adverbial noun phrase is if the noun phrase answers the questions when, where, or how.
  4. Verb phrases are infinitive phrases used as modifiers.
  5. Dependent (subordinate) clauses begin with a subordinating conjunction and have a subject and predicate.

​Adverbial degrees

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There are three adverbial degrees: positive, comparative, and superlative.

Positive adverbs express a quality without referencing anything else.

Comparative adverbs compare the quality of a specified action done by two persons, groups, or things.
Superlative adverbs compare the quality of an action between at least three persons, groups, or things. Superlative adverbs are sometimes used for emphasis rather than comparison.

Placement of adverbials

The placement of an adverbial can change the emphasis, tone, and meaning of the sentence, so it’s important that you exactly what you want to convey. Generally, you want to place the adverb as near to what it’s modifying as possible to prevent a misreading.
Introductory adverbials occur before the main clause. They can set the scene, create cohesion by connecting sentences with known information, orient the reader in time and place, and modify the tone of the whole sentence.
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When I walked into the parlor, she sat on the settee.
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Middle adverbials show up within or directly around the verb phrase. They put stress on the verb, but they can also interrupt the flow of the sentence and can slow the reader down. The normal placement of simple and flat adverbs is here, between the auxiliary and principal verbs or following a principal verb. Adverbs that modify words other than verbs should immediately precede the word qualified.

She hastily sat on the settee.

Ending adverbials are placed after the main clause. They put stress on the adverbial. If the adverbial provides new information, it should be placed here. Adverbs generally follow intransitive verbs.

She was sitting on the settee when I walked into the parlor.

​Signs of ineffective adverbials

Now that we’ve gone through the types, degrees, and placement of adverbials, here are some signs an adverbial is ineffective:
  • The adverbial tells us what we already know.
  • The adverbial is imprecise.
  • The adverbial is in the wrong spot.​
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  • The adverbial is separated from the sentence, creating a fragment.
Basically, if an adverbial is not enriching the reader’s imagining of a sentence, it’s probably ineffective. An effective adverbial adds mood, tone, meaning, and nuance to a sentence.

​​Exercise 4

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Further study

The Chicago Manual of Style 5.156–5.171
3 writing myths debunked
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