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Editor's Roundup: November 2022

11/30/2022

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​What’s discussed in this post

  • Farther vs. further
  • Unphased vs. unfazed
  • Breech vs. breach
  • Self-editing tips
  • ​Further reading

Farther vs. further

Of the three listed, further and farther is the most common correction I make. While they have similar definitions, The Chicago Manual of Style indicates that further and farther should be used in distinct ways.

Further is for metaphorical distance.
That couldn’t be further from my mind.
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Farther is for literal or physical distance.
She ran farther than me.

Unphased vs. unfazed

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I usually see this when an author is trying to describe a character being unaffected:
She was unphased by his comment.

However, to phase means to schedule or perform a plan or task in stages, and to faze means to disturb or disconcert. 
Therefore, the correct word to describe a character being “unaffected,” is unfazed.
She was unfazed by his comment.

​Breech vs. breach

Typically, an author mixes up these verbs when they’re describing breaking through a perimeter:
They breeched the border.

However, breech doesn’t have a verb form according to Merriam-Webster. It is a noun meaning the buttocks.

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At thirty-seven weeks, the baby was in a breech position.

The verb form of breach means to break open or break through. Therefore, breach is the correct homophone to use.

They breached the border. ​

Self-editing tips

When dealing with homophones and near-homophones, we need to look at both the words’ meanings and the context to determine which word to use.

One way to do this is to highlight the word, right-click, and look up synonyms. If none of the synonyms match the meaning of the word, you're probably using the wrong homophone. However, in the case of further and farther, this way would not be reliable because the first definition of further is farther (English is so fun).
 
So if you have MS Word, a second way to do this is to add the MerriamFetch macro. This is my favorite way to verify spelling and word choice because you can set it up with a keyboard shortcut so that Merriam-Webster is a keystroke away at all times.
Here is where you can find the MerriamFetch macro by Paul Beverley.

Lastly, if you know what homophones you confuse, make a reference chart!

Further reading

Instagram, @itssarahhawkinsedits, “Is it I have further to go or I have farther to go?” 
The Chicago Manual of Style, “5.250 Good Usage versus common usage.”
Editing Macros by Paul Beverley
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Editor's Roundup: One word or two?

9/30/2022

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What's discussed in this post

  • Introduction
  • Door frame or doorframe?
  • On to or onto?
  • Compounds beginning with half
  • Self-editing tips: One word or two?
  • Further reading

Introduction

​Welcome to Editor’s roundup, a monthly post of common edits I’ve made in the last month. This month, we’re discussing 3 compounds that authors commonly mix up, and I’ll give you some tips on how to self-edit for word compounds.
But first, why is it important for you to self-edit for word compounds? That answer is easy: many editors, including myself, base their rates on the total word count. So, if you have a ton of open compounds (two-word compounds) when they are meant to be closed (one word), you will pay more for your editing.
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Door frame or doorframe?

​We’ll start with an easy one. Often, I see authors split doorframe into 2 words, and I’ve even caught myself splitting the compound in my own writing! Merriam-Webster says doorframe is the correct spelling, so I looked into why we have a tendency to split the word. According to the Google Books Ngram Viewer, which checks how words and phrases are used over time, doorframe became the more common spelling in the 2010s. The use of door frame tapered off in 2013, and the use of doorframe peaked in 2017.

While door frame is still in use, a quick google search for entries of door frame yields results for doorframe in Merriam-Webster, Cambridge, Dictionary.com, and others, so I would stick to the one-word version.

On to or onto?

One of the fun things about being an editor is that I second-guess every grammatical rule I know, and then I end up down the rabbit hole. Along with lay vs. lie conjugations, I research onto vs. on to regularly, because if you mix them up, you can change the meaning of your sentence.

To know whether you need to use onto or on to, you need to know 4 things.

1.

The first thing to know is that the confusion with onto and on to we’re discussing here lies with using onto and on to as prepositions of direction.

2.

The second thing to know is that when you use on to, you’re actually using two distinct prepositions of direction: on and to. So, you need to look at these two words individually to see if they both fit the context.

  • To describes movement toward a destination.
  • On describes position.

Therefore, you’d only use the prepositions on and to together when you’re describing an object moving toward a destination and into a position. Often, you’re working with a verbal phrase (moved on) and–or an infinitive phrase (to become) when you use on to.

She went on to become a bestselling author. (The object she moved toward and into the position of becoming a bestselling author.)

They led them on to the upper landing. (The object them was led toward the position of the upper landing.)

She moved on to her next lover so fast. (The object she moved toward and into the position of a new lover.)

3.

Let’s move on to the third thing to know (see what I did there?), which is that onto means to position on, so it’s about an object’s movement on a surface.

I held onto the railing for dear life.
I set my phone onto the charger.
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The fourth thing to know is that onto and on are interchangeable. So, a good trick to know if you should onto instead of on to is to drop the to. If you drop to without any meaning changing, you can use onto.
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I set my phone onto the charger and I set my phone on the charger mean the same thing, but I set my phone on the charger sounds better.

Compounds beginning with half

Half can precede verbs, nouns, and adjectives to create compound words. Those grammatical functions determine whether the compound is one word or two. According to The Chicago Manual of Style, the following general rules apply:

  • Adjectives are hyphenated to make one word (She peeked through the half-opened door).
  • Nouns are two words (She opened the half door).
  • Verbs are two words (She half opened the door).

​There are two major exceptions to these rules:
  1. The word is permanently one word or two according to the dictionary.
  2. The authorial or publisher style has a different preference. Yes, this means, if you’re an indie author, this is one of the places you can have a stylistic choice. You just need to communicate with your editor what your preferences are.

Self-editing tips

Editing for word compounds can be tricky. Spellcheck will often not recognize if a compound should be two words, one word, or hyphenated. Using a grammar check like Grammarly (although I think you need the premium version) or ProWritingAid can help you eliminate a lot of needless two-word compounds. Additionally, if you edit in Word, you can install a macro that will enable to you look up the word in Merriam-Webster with a couple of clicks.
Here are some final tips:

  • You generally hyphenate adjective compounds before a noun but not after a noun (the half-opened door vs. the door is half opened).
  • Nouns and verbs are typically open (two words) or closed (one word, not hyphenated), according to the dictionary entry.
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  • If you prefer an open or hyphenated compound to be closed, make it into a portmanteau! For example, I love to use snortlaughed instead of she snorted a laugh because it reads more like the action. If you follow this advice, make sure they make sense. Also, inform your editor which portmanteaus you created so they don’t edit them out!


Finally, as you learn which compounds you tend to mix up, make a Find+Replace list for future reference.

Further reading

Google Books Ngram View: doorframe and door frame
Merriam-Webster.com Dictionary, s.v. “onto,” accessed September 25, 2022, https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/onto.
The Chicago Manual of Style 7.89
“Using word macros for editing,” Rabbit with a Red Pen
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